Total Trust.....Lostrudy19321 2008.11.07 07:11 ↑ 0 ↓ This is the story of the total trust
You gave me and I lost I was a bad thing I never used to think More than once I dropped And you helped me on my feet up And then again I didn't care And walked in that very same dark track You pushed me to show me the light And that there is a better track Straight, bright and no one can dropp in it In front of you I walked in it But still the dark was what I wished You saw me walk to the light You gave me your total trust You never thought I'll go back to the dark After I knew that there was light But too bad I did You somehow saw me in it And all the trust you gave me I lost Because you saw me dropp again But it was a bigger drop You told me help yourself out This time I really regret But you said to late You've dropped And only you can help yourself out Because if I help you You'll return back to it That very dark scary track And here I'm begging you To help me out of it And you'll see me in that light Never wanting that dark life Please help me out And give me Ur forgiveness After I take Allah's. Commenting disabled by author. Why?
I Remember.....rudy19321 2008.11.07 07:09 ↑ 0 ↓ I remember you used to look at me,
You used to give me that smile, It made me forget everything around, But everything changes, Like how the sun comes and goes, Unfortunately you changed, So I'd to change too. I'd no choice but to look around, To look for someone who really needs me, Who really cares about me, Who really wants to spend the rest of my life with him, Who is really desperate 'cause I didn't used to be with him, So he is going to do his best to let me be his. I looked a lot until I found that guy, But it was a shock to me, When I realized that that guy was you, You changed alright, But you still wanted me to be part of your life, -to be all of your life-. And that feeling came back up, When I walked away, I also realized that........that I can't live without you........ That I only need you........that I'll only be with you. Commenting disabled by author. Why?
I Thought.......rudy19321 2008.11.07 07:06 ↑ 0 ↓ I thought I meant something to you,
I know you meant everything to me, But maybe I just wasn't that clear, That I need you so very much with me. I tried hard to show you everything in my heart, i tried to open it for you really very wide, And I gave you the keys to it. I thought you'd enter inside, Shut my heart and stay in there, You did shut my heart but stood outside, Turned your back to it and left, And went to that girl, Who was standing right next to me, 'cause she gave you that smile, And you thought it meant she cared. But the truth was that, She drew that smile to every guy, And most of them got tricked, -Even you I can't believe it-, NOW I shut my heart, LOCKED IT with a new key, And you are asking “Can I enter? ”, DAMN HELL YOU CAN'T. Commenting disabled by author. Why?
I Used Torudy19321 2008.11.07 07:05 ↑ 0 ↓ I used to look up to you,
I thought you were so touch to reach, I knew I won't reach to you, I won't even be close. The way you used to act, It made you so perfect, You were always right, And never were you wrong. I tried hard to be like you, Or at lest a bit like you, But it was always useless, 'cause I thought you were so pure. But when we left each other, I started to see the real you, You aren't perfect at all, Nothing like close. Now I saw that I was the right one, And made it like it was you, 'cause I wanted to feel that you were right, In every single word. I thought I'd be vain without you, But now I knew you are nothing without me. Commenting disabled by author. Why?
I Wasn’t Sure About Yourudy19321 2008.11.07 07:03 ↑ 0 ↓ When I first saw you
I wasn’t sure about you I really did change I was wondering what about you When my eyes met yours I wanted to tell you How I did change But I wasn’t sure about you When you talked I wanted to answer Every word you asked But I wasn’t sure about you When I left I wanted to stay with you I didn’t want to leave you But I wasn’t sure about you Now that I’ve gone And many years have passed I wanted to go back to you ’cause I really did change When I first saw you Although I wasn’t sure about you. Commenting disabled by author. Why?
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