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I must be honest and say I do not like the last two lines . They seem a bit out of place . Other than that , I thouight it was a well written piece . And I thought , a rather unique one for the descri... Squandering My InheritanceI read some of the other comments and I love the way you write . You do include rhyme in your writing and it is a big plus in style . But do I disagree with the sentiment and meaning as you expressed ... MUSIC IS ETERNAL!Music is indeed universal and there are certain melodies that are special to us all. I have been involved in music on an amateur level for over thirty years and it brings me much pleasure, writing poe... ChillingworthSelf preservation - sometimes very destructive!!! As ever another great piece Ferg!!! Where Is Respite?This piece is what I call a Lament . I do not consider such to be poetry but instead to be a kind of philosophical or even spiritual prose . To me , this makes it more notable and worthwhile than a po... The Story Behind the LineI think we have all had moments when we wish the clock would turn back - just for those few seconds and change everything. But these things are sent for us to deal with and its how we deal with them I... My Desk MovesYes, we all carry our own 'desk' but using it is some days harder than others!!! And the simplest of things........ why do we lose the gift of simple appreciation when we get older? This is so nostalgic and carries a sentiment most of us would agree with at the same time not regre... UNREALThanks Greenwolfe, so good to be having your comments again. UNREALA genuine expression of life for both man and woman . A philosophical visual more true than might be imagined by most . The only element absent from this piece is time . The only casual reference to i... CenterfoldI think I know what you are comprehending here Marvin , and it is not living believe me . All young men have strong imaginations where it concerns the opposite sex . Alas ! Most of them get dashed upo... MUSIC IS ETERNAL!Thanks for your heart felt comment about my poem on Muisc! Hello Ferg : The best part about this is the way you circled the poem . You begin and you end in the same place . This is a marvelous characteristic to find in a poem and it makes the reader appreci... MUSIC IS ETERNAL!This is so true . It is why I write in Rhythm and Rhyme . In ancient times , it was necessary for the elders of a tribe to pass down stories to the young ones . In order to be able to tell these stori... Shanethanks Ferg, Shane exist but she's a lovely Filipina with an Irish features. She's rakishly beautiful looking young woman. |
You are very welcome, my dear friend!
